As the script has been written in Celtx, I have had to take images of the script - as my printer also does not allow me to scan directly onto the computer. these scripts can be viewed in the second sketchbook after the storyboard. A script breakdown is also required, though due to it being an animation this is only based on colours in areas of the script.
In the above images (though unreadable) the scrip[t had been annotated, these are annotations on improvements of the script; as well as revisions on the camera angles. This can also count as a script break down, as camera angles annotated - however this is not the scripts final version - and shot will be just as descriptive in the second script which is going to be put into a colour based script breakdown.
Above are images of the scripts final draft, this script was improved in language based on self critique and a critique from another person. feedback:
The script has a good pace and is generally well written, the comedy within the script is partially slapstick but as this product is aimed
at a child audience it would most likely hit its mark extremely well, over-all the script is well written and I think it has little room for improvement.
The script has been given a final spell check, as many miss spells were present.
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